Creativity Vitamin: Clean the Clutter

May 16, 2013 in Guest post, Thursday Writing, Tips and Suggestions, Writers by Janel Gradowski

A messy work space leads to a messy mind. You have heard some version of that phrase, haven’t you? Clearing the clutter from my writing space is something I make a point to do on a regular basis. I am really not a neat freak, I can happily ignore stacks of mail on the kitchen table or precariously stacked video game boxes on the entertainment center. The reason I regularly clean up my writing space is simple. I’m more productive. That is good enough for me to spend some quality time doing clutter control on a regular basis. A clean work space leads to a less-cluttered mind.

Don’t believe me? Imagine this scenario.

You are in the middle of writing a scene. You pause for a few seconds to ponder the perfect detail to add to your villain’s appearance. Your gaze wanders from your computer screen to a stack of unopened mail. Yes, most of it is junk mail, but there are bills in the pile that could be overdue. You abandon your writing to sort through mail. Clutter has claimed more victims. You and your WIP.

Have you ever written down notes for a project and then lost them? However, in your search through the mountains of paper on your desk you did discover some notes for another story. Notes that would’ve made that story much better, but it’s too late because it has already been published. Now you’re frustrated about two stories.

Maybe you have a favorite pen that you like to edit hard copies with. What happens if you sit down with a stack of pages to edit and you can’t find the pen? You could grab another one, but there’s also a good chance you’ll waste time searching for the coveted pen. There went a nice chunk of editing time.

So how do you get your writing space clean? If your desk is a huge mess, you can tackle your clean up in stages.

  • Throughout the work day when you need to take a break, clean up a few things.
  • Sort through one pile or area at a time.
  • Set up files to keep necessary items and always have your garbage can nearby.
  • Maybe buy, or make, some nice pen holders or boxes to organize notepads, paperclips, sticky notes, etc.
  • If you tend to keep your space neat anyway, make sure to set aside some time each week to do a clutter control sweep.
  • Don’t view the process as a household chore…think of it as a benefit to your writing life.

Are you ready to start cleaning up your writing space, or do you always keep it clean?

~ Janel Gradowski

 

*image copyright Janel Gradowski

 

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5 Common Errors that Spell-Check Won’t Correct

May 9, 2013 in Thursday Writing, Tips and Suggestions by Dana Sitar

No matter how good technology gets, you’re always going to need an editor’s eye – -yours or someone else’s — to polish your writing. Spell-check won’t catch these glaring grammar mistakes and typos.

1. Typos

Spell-check will catch a lot of typos, because they result in misspellings. But what about when you accidentally typo a real word? The most common I see in published writing is and instead of an, but typos come in many varieties. Be careful what your hands do when you’re not paying attention.

2. Using the wrong homonym

Nothing gets under a writer’s skin more than seeing these common mistakes:

  • there instead of their or they’re
  •  your instead of you’re
  •  to instead of too or two
  • it’s instead of its
  • by instead of buy

3. Using the wrong word

affect is usually a verb.

effect is usually a noun.

BUT affect does NOT mean “to bring about” or “to cause (something) to happen”. That’s effect.

Ex: The effect of four years of experience was that I was able to effect progress in any organization, ultimately affecting my ability to gain further employment.

Others include then instead of than; and I often see pluralization mistakes like woman instead of women.

4. Misspelling a name

Spell-check doesn’t know all of the people you write about, but many of your readers will. Be sure to double-check the spelling of your subjects’ names, including the preferred capitalization and spacing for names like MacArthur or da Vinci. Don’t guess; it’s rude, and getting it wrong will annoy your subjects and your readers, and cut into your credibility.

5. Punctuation Errors

My spell-check is still uncomfortable when I use an em dash without surrounding spaces (OK by Chicago style); it gives me that glaring squiggly red line that forces me to search hard for a spelling mistake that isn’t there. I haven’t had any better luck with grammar-check for punctuation, so I’ve had to rely on real knowledge and a keen eye to ensure correct usage.

What common mistakes get under your skin as a writer or editor?

This post originally appeared at danasitar.com. Image by Matt Hampel (Creative Commons)

May Holidays for the Literary Minded

April 25, 2013 in Celebration, Holidays = Inspiration, Thursday Writing, Writing Fun by Catherine Russell

Let’s face it. Some days just cry out for creativity. Aside from the more popular holidays, like Mother’s Day and Cinco de Mayo, the merry month of May is brimming with reasons to celebrate.

What April Fool’s Day is to clowns, the month of May is to bibliophiles.

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May 3rd: Make a Book Day*

I’ve found several other days cited for making books also, including May 1st, but this one lands on Kite Day as well as Paranormal Day. So, take from that what you will. Perhaps make a book about possessed kites?

May 4th: Free Comic Book Day (first Saturday in May)

This day may possibly be the busiest holiday for my family, since we make a point of hitting as many comic books stores as we can. Participating stores give away copies of special edition comics printed just for the ‘holiday’, often with people dressing up as their favorite characters. And in addition to getting free stuff (who doesn’t love that?), it’s usually a great way to find new stores to haunt.

May 4th: Star Wars Day (In Los Angeles, May 25th in honor of the 1977 release of Star Wars)

May the Fourth be with you. Honestly, I didn’t make up the pun, but many bookstores hold special Star Wars themed events on this day(s). Why not take advantage?

May 5th: Cartoonist’s Day

Need I say more?

May 9th: Peter Pan Day

Celebrate the birthday of author James Barrie, creator of the beloved children’s classic, by indulging your inner child. Peter Pan can be downloaded free of charge courtesy of Project Gutenberg. Do you believe in fairies?

May 12th: Limerick Day (Edward Lear‘s birthday)

Read one or write some of your own!

May 14th: George Lucas Born

Have a cake or design a birthday themed story for the creator of Star Wars!

May 15th: L. Frank Baum

Read one of the Oz books or watch one of the movies; indulge your inner child… or maybe a child you know.

May 18th: O. Henry Pun Day

Hosted every May at the O. Henry Museum in Austin, Texas, the O. Henry Pun-Off World Championships feature punsters celebrating world play. Even if you aren’t in Texas, you can engage in a some of “the lowest and most groveling kind of wit (according to John Dryden).” Tweet, blog, or post your most witty and/or obnoxious homonyms and double entendres. After all, who doesn’t enjoy a little PUN and games?***

May 22: Sir Arthur Conan Doyle

Write a story, read one, indulge in some creative analytic thinking, or just call everyone ‘My dear, Watson,’ all day. But be sure to remember that this talented author wrote more than just the beloved Sherlock Holmes stories. The creator of this incredibly logical character was a spiritualist, but he also wrote The Lost World and a wealth of other adventure stories.

May 25th: Towel Day

Towel Day is a fan created holiday to honor the late author, Douglas Adams. In his famous series, The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy, a towel is cited as being the most important thing an intersteller hitchhiker should never be without, so fans proudly wear a towel and/or take pictures of themselves with their towels, to show their love of a great series and a wonderful author.

May 25th: Nerd Pride Day or Geek Pride Day

I’ve never celebrated this particular holiday, having only recently discovered it, but I love this. Such notable institutions as Think Geek and Wired magazine have honored this day in the past, so be sure to look for cool stuff from them, or maybe just subscribe to a podcast like The Functional Nerds!** Nerdfighters.com is also a cool place for nerds to hang out and play.*****

May 31st: Walt Whitman’s Birthday

The author of Leaves of Grass left behind a poetic legacy. Honor the day of his birth by reading or listening to some of his work or creating some free verse poetry of your very own.****

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Obviously, the reason that May is such a merry month for writers is the abundance of days to celebrate both our literary and cultural diversity. Be sure to keep something on you to catch your overflowing creativity. Go forth, grab a towel and a free comic, and celebrate to your heart’s content!

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*Many of these holidays have different dates depending on the source, so I can’t attest to how “official” they are. However, do you really need an “official” reason to do something fun?

**In the interest of full disclosure, I do write book reviews for the Functional Nerds website, though I stand behind my recommendation. Their shows are always fun and entertaining.

***I had to do it.

****Both the text and audio of Leaves of Grass can be downloaded free of charge from Project Gutenberg as well as ManyBooks.net. I often turn to both these valuable resources for free ebooks.

*****Editor Estrella Azul couldn’t help but add this website to the nerdy mix.

As a Writer, How to be Prolific – Part Two

April 11, 2013 in Thursday Writing, Tips and Suggestions, Writers by Alex Carrick

If you have not read it yet, you can find here Part One of  “As a Writer, How to be Prolific”.

(4) Free associate. This can be important both in non-fiction and freer-content writing. Looking back, I realize I have been lucky to be an economist. To fulfill my function properly, I have been forced – although it’s been more self-imposed rather than dictated by my bosses – to compose an article on one aspect of the economy or another every day for years. That alone has helped me focus.

But there is another side-benefit to being an economist. My profession understands there are interconnections between everything, no matter how unlikely they may seem. Weather patterns in far off places cause certain commodity prices to move up or down. A shift in interest rates in Japan might send the greenback on a shuddering roller-coaster ride.

In my non-fiction writing, I employ free association all the time. It adds color and depth to my articles. For example, if I am writing a story about the latest retail trade numbers issued by the Census Bureau, I will often also mention what’s happening on the inflation front. If imported clothing prices are dropping, that might well influence buying patterns. Or if the price of gasoline is skyrocketing, there will be less money available to spend in other areas, such as on entertainment and meals out.

Or to make the article resonate on a more personal level, perhaps there should be a sidebar about my latest trip to the drug store during which I discovered, to my great chagrin and disappointment, the price of adult diapers had doubled. Yes, I’m just kidding, for now at least.

Blogging has changed non-fiction writing. There’s less emphasis on dry facts everywhere in the media. The shift has been towards expressing an opinion. Don’t be hesitant about speaking out.

(5) What may not be as obvious is the degree to which professional writers free associate in their fictional works as well. This leads to my next point: rely on your memory. Say you have a character in your story and you are having trouble bringing him or her to life. Let your mind roam. Think of an interesting anecdote that is revealing about your own personality or someone you know. You may want to change the names and alter the circumstances – after all, who wants to be sued? Then eagerly assign the incident to your “fictitious” players. It will humanize them and make them more believable.

A good imagination is a great quality to have as a writer. Where does it come from? How can it be strengthened? Nothing adds originality to your material like free associating. You are the only one with “your” thoughts in “your” head. If you can harness them and externalize them properly, then you’ll automatically come up with something fresh to say. Did you like my Pet Sematary reference in point (1)? If so, I have proved my point.

(6) Do your homework before you start writing. Have the research already under your belt. That way you will not be stopped in your tracks every time you want to add an embellishment. A corollary is to know your subject. It’ll provide you with confidence.

That is it for now. I am not going to agonize over additional points or force you to labor through more of my arguments. Let’s let this piece fly and see if she takes wings.

Perhaps you are still in doubt about whether or not being prolific is even a desirable goal. Consider this.

There’s an old saying that captures a basic truth – if you want something done quickly and right, ask a busy person to do it.

As a Writer, How to be Prolific – Part One

April 4, 2013 in Thursday Writing, Tips and Suggestions, Writers by Alex Carrick

The title of this article, “As a Writer, How to be Prolific”, is presumptuous in several ways.

First, it assumes being prolific is something you, the reader who’s also a writer, might want to become. Maybe you’d rather doddle over your manuscript and revise, revise and revise again until it has reached “perfection”.

On many occasions, however, that’s not really the desirable approach. Especially if you are being paid for your material and a deadline is looming. Or perhaps you are doing something for a friend or colleague and feel a sense of responsibility to provide the final copy in a timely fashion. Or better yet, you simply want to get your words out into the public sphere as often as possible.

Second, I set a personal goal to produce this article rather quickly. If I am not able to pull it off, then I will be faced with an awkward question, “Do I know what I’m talking about?” So here goes. Let’s assume you do want to acquire a reputation for producing quality material in abundance.

The following are my suggestions on how to achieve your goal.

(1) Learn how to touch type. This may seem rinky-dink, but believe me, it’s not! To my mind this is absolutely crucial. It has been critically important in my own working life as a professional economist. It is (almost) never too late to learn. When I was in my early 40′s, I switched employers. I was moving to a new job where I would be doing a lot more writing. There was only one way I’d be able to keep up with the work load and that would be to transcribe my thoughts directly from my mind to a computer screen.

Consequently, I enrolled in a Saturday morning business class on keyboarding. After the three hour session, I’d go home and spend another hour practicing. I followed a daily routine during the work week of clicking away whenever I could at lunch time or after dinner. I started typing my way through Stephen King’s novel, Pet Sematary. By the time I was on page 100, the muscle memory in my dancing fingers was firmly embedded.

(2) Do not prevaricate. Take action. Sit down and watch your words appear on the screen. In the old days, such an affirmative step was known as putting something on paper. You have to begin somewhere. Leap in. Revise and polish later. Do this often enough, and you will discover your first drafts begin to take shape better than you ever thought possible.

There is always the option to revise. But I’d be cautious about being a fanatic about it. Make sure the flow is good and the grammar correct; that your arguments follow logically; and there are reasons for the reader to move from one paragraph to the next. But also keep in mind you’re not really likely to become the next James Joyce. Please, no hisses or boos here. I am only sharing a conversation I have with myself quite frequently.

(3) During your free time, read like a banshee. I am assuming, perhaps erroneously, that banshees are bookworms. I’m sure you get my drift in any event. Keep up with the news. The very good reason for this – beyond enjoyment and staying current – is my next point.

Stay tuned for Part Two, next Thursday.

April Days Every Writer should Celebrate

March 28, 2013 in Holidays = Inspiration, Thursday Writing, Tips and Suggestions by Catherine Russell

Everyone knows the big holidays, whether they celebrate them or not. Unless you are living somewhere remote, like the moon, pretty much everyone understands the concept of setting aside special days. So in the interest of feeding your muse machine (my muse is a robot), why not take the time to observe some of the less popular celebrations?

National Poetry Month from the Academy of American Poets

There’s no reason Americans should have all the fun! So whether you decide to break out your Robert Frost anthology or write a poem per day, do something to commemorate Calliope’s favorite month.

1 April Fool’S Day

The name says it all, folks. Practical jokes can be very inspirational. My favorite fictional practical joker is Jim on The Office, but if you aren’t into putting staplers into jello, feel free to fill the salt container with sugar or plant a whoopy cushion in your boss’s chair. He has a sense of humor; right?*

6th Plan Your Epitaph Day

This may be one of the coolest obscure holidays EVER. Seriously, it’s like it was created with writers in mind. And while there is some debate as to which day is officially the day to plan your epitaph, why not just do it today? After all, it’s your last words, inscribed forever on a stone. Do you want posterity to know what type of person you are, or just leave ‘em laughing? Don’t leave it up to someone else. Go for it.

14th through the 20th National Library Week

Technically it’s not a holiday, especially since it’s a whole week. Then again, in my humble opinion, we need more days devoted to celebrating books. So stop in to your local library, or even visit their website, and find out what you can do to promote and celebrate these marvelous institutions.

15th TAX DAY

Death and Taxes? Almost as somber as ‘Plan your epitaph’ day, US citizens need to have their tax forms turned in to Uncle Sam by this ‘deadline’ or face the consequences. Take some of the edge off by doing something fun but tax-themed, like… well, I can’t think of anything, but therein lies the challenge.

22nd Earth Day

An annual holiday since 1970, Earth Day primarily focuses on support for protecting the environment. So whether you decide to bring your own coffee cup to work, start using reusable totes to shop, give up meat for a day, or write a story or poem dedicated to Mother Earth, do something to promote environmental awareness.

23rd World Book Night

This began as a UK event, then spread to the US. While I realize it’s not a ‘holiday’ in the strictest sense, why shouldn’t we all celebrate our love of books? Many reading programs aim at getting children interested in reading, but World Book Night targets adults. Participants give away copies of books they love to adults they think might enjoy them, the gateway drug of literature. And while it’s too late to ‘officially’ become a World Book Night participant if you haven’t already signed up, there’s no reason you can’t do something similar on your own. So grab a copy of The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy (or whatever book you adore) and give copies out to complete strangers. It’s a wonderfully satisfying experience.

23rd Shakespeare’s Birthday

While the actual date of the Bard’s birth is unknown, he was christened on April 26th, leading historians to guess that he was born on the 23rd. See a play, read a biography, or speak in Shakespeare quotes all day long, but don’t forget to celebrate the life and work of the Bard of Avon.

26th Arbor Day

In the United States, this traditionally falls on the last Friday in April, when conscientious citizens take it upon themselves to plant a tree. Not that ambitious? Plant a seed or write a poem about trees!

There are enough obscure holidays to celebrate each calendar day, many times over, but I’ve simply picked out some of my favorites. If you want to look up others, check out Holiday Insights, Fun and Obscure Holidays, and this fun post at Families.com. Of course, you could always make up your own.

*That was a joke. Please don’t get fired or sent to the hospital because of a practical joke! Use common sense and be careful of your friends’ and coworkers’ safety.

**image courtesy of Cornell University Library via Flickr. No known copyright restrictions.

An Editor of Unawkwardifying

March 14, 2013 in Thursday Writing, Tips and Suggestions, Writers by Alex Carrick

Are you wondering what separates an amateur writer from a professional?

In fiction, either long-story format or shorter works, there are many answers:

  • Research into the setting and background is certainly a key element.
  • The use of language is another.
  • Engaging characters that the reader becomes emotionally attached to is a third.
  • Also add to the list the ability to write realistic dialogue.

From a purely technical standpoint, a key ingredient shows up in the flow:

  • The way the words chug along. The inevitable manner in which each set of phrases, sentences and paragraphs follow one another.
  • It’s also the surprises one encounters along the way.

So that is what I’m going to explore today, the latter two points, and how to make sure your writing has a professional gloss. And it is not about using big words or sounding smart. In fact, the very best writing comes across as so “whole”, it seems it must have been easy to write. One might even say there can be an innocence about it.

It’s similar to the best acting. Flawless. Perhaps the effect is better expressed as being natural. One does not see the artifice behind it. You forget the real-life actor and only pay attention to the character he or she is portraying. That is what you as an author want to achieve – a smoothness that’s deceptive. You want to trick the reader into not being aware of the effort behind the work.

The best writers will tell you they revise and revise and then revise again. They keep reading what they have written to make sure it sounds good in their own heads. Then they read it out loud, preferably to an audience. That’s when difficult or questionable phrasing becomes most apparent. If you stumble over a passage when speaking the words, it undoubtedly needs fixing.

It is also a good idea to have someone – who’s opinion you respect – go over the nearly final draft as well. They may spot something you have overlooked. I’ll certainly have my wife Donna read this article. She will offer suggestions and we won’t speak for a few days, but it will be worth it. Right honey? Sweetheart, where are you? Did she just leave the house and slam the door?

Often a word will have more than one meaning. You, the author, have used it in a certain context, knowing exactly what you mean. Someone else, who does not share your mind, may think of another usage and be baffled. Action passages are particularly open to misinterpretation. It is hard to compress a great deal of activity into a few sentences and confusion can be the result. If you feel you may have fallen into this trap, simplify and strive for clarity.

Now I come to a particular beef of mine. There is at least one sure give-away that a budding author is inexperienced. The old saying is true: everyone does have a story to tell. But please don’t do it with sentences that are simply a string of clichés.

When a tale unfolds through the use of every hoary old phrase imaginable, I quickly become bored. It’s hard not to fall into this trap. We use phrases in the vernacular to such a degree they spill out onto the page.

  • “The sun appeared like a red rubber ball on the day Jesse hot-wired the Chevy.”
  • “The squat pawnbroker was round as a beach ball with a bald pate that shone like a golf ball.”

Excessive appearances of the words “like” and “as” are sure signs you may be straying into banal territory. Try to catch yourself and offer the reader something new. For example,

  • “The quarter-moon hung like an albino banana against a black-velvet background on the night Big Bertha met her myopic maker.”

Watch for the same word repeated over and over, maybe even within a single sentence. The beauty of the English language is that there are many alternative ways of saying the same thing. Words that are a little out of the ordinary, if repeated often enough, will reduce a reader to giggles each time they’re spotted. Nobody should “grimace” more than once in a novel or short story or undertake something – indeed, anything – with “concomitant” effects.

Now that I have exorcised those bees from my bonnet – whoops! – I mean hornets from my hairpiece, I would like to mention another of my pet peeves, plot lines which mimic other more successful stories.

I don’t want to read a story that simply tweaks the “Twilight” saga. Or plays a riff on the Hunger Games. Or turns a Shade of Gray into varying degrees of off-chartreuse or a deeper maroon. Those books have had their successful runs. Yes, their story arcs employ traditional themes, but they are combined in unique modern ways.

Do not give a vampire an extra fang and expect everyone to lap it up. Sorry again. “Suck it back with a right incisor.”

It is time to wrap up my rant with a quick summary: Simplify, strive for a smooth flow, avoid cliché phrasing and squeeze your brain hard until it spits out something original.

What right do I have to offer such advice? When I posed that question to myself, I was at first stumped. Then it came to me. If I had to choose an alternative profession I’d like to pursue, as opposed to being an economist, the answer is easy.

I think I’m ideally suited to be an “Editor of Unawkwardifying”.

 

*image via Google Images, found here, no known copyright.

How to Review Awful Books

March 7, 2013 in Thursday Writing, Tips and Suggestions by Catherine Russell

Times are hard, and if you are one of those who reviews books as well as reading them, you know that it’s important to give an accurate review. When you couple that with the knowledge of an author’s fragile ego and the fact that, no matter what the quality of the work, they spent a lot of time and effort composing the story, it complicates matters further. After all, no one wants to be the bad guy (well, maybe some, but most don’t). How does the compassionate reviewer give a truthful review of a bad book? One that lets a potential reader know what type of story they may be devoting hours of their time to, while at the same time being fair to the author?

It is quite the pickle.

Over the past couple years, I’ve come across this problem several times. When I read a book that I love, my first impulse is to recommend it to others to share the joy. Who doesn’t love a good story? But it’s also important to keep in mind that a review is, first and foremost, only your opinion. Just because you didn’t enjoy something, doesn’t mean someone else won’t. So I have some basic rules I use when reviewing.

First, a brief synopsis introduces the reader to the type of novel you’ll be talking about. There needs to be enough information that readers know if they would be interested, but not so much that it spoils the story. Although some people may read the review after they’ve read the book, you have to assume that they are unfamiliar with the material. Think of writing something similar to a blurb found on the back of the book – but obviously, don’t copy the blurb from the book.

Second, list the pros and cons of the book. By all means, give your opinion, but try to cite examples of what you thought worked AND didn’t work. Remember, even though it’s easy to focus on the good in a book you loved, you should also focus on the positive in a book you didn’t – though it may take more effort. It’s truly rare to find an awful book with absolutely no redeeming qualities. If the story was exciting or boring, give a non-spoiler example of why. Were the characters believable? Did you find the prose clunky or the narration sexist? Talk about why you felt that way. Some readers may agree and pass, but others might disagree and give the book a shot.

And finally, end with a summary of why you do not recommend the book. If you truly can’t find anything good to say about a book, soften the blow with constructive criticism. Authors are fragile creatures, and their egos can get bent out of shape by the slightest negative comment. So after noting the things you didn’t like, talk about how you think it could be better. Their feelings might still be hurt, but feedback will let them know what you – as a reader – might like to see in their work. It may not be pretty, but it is useful, and in an often solitary occupation like writing, feedback is a wonderful tool. They may not agree with your suggestions, but it helps turn a negative into a positive.

So, if you end up picking a book to review that you absolutely hate, at least ease your mind knowing you are doing your best to make reading and writing a more positive experience.

*image courtesy of shutterhacks via Flickr. Some rights reserved.

How to NOT drive yourself crazy waiting

February 21, 2013 in Thursday Writing, Tips and Suggestions by Catherine Russell

 

Tom Petty knows what he’s talking about.

Specifically, the waiting IS the hardest part. Oh, of course you could argue that the writing is the hardest part, scribbling your ideas onto the page like a madman, racing to get them down before they evaporate into the ether. Another case could be made for editing, when you cut out unnecessary exposition, ruthlessly killing your darlings when they don’t advance the plot. But those actions are something you can control. You might not believe that when your characters refuse to behave the way you want, but it’s true.

However, once you release your beloved prose out into the wild, the only thing left to do is wait.

Which is why the lonely writer drowning their sorrows in a bottle is such a prevalent image. I prefer grape soda, but we each have our vices.

The way I see it, you have several choices.

Do nothing.

You can distract yourself watching Star Trek and Doctor Who, eat copious quantities of sugary sweets, and gnaw your fingernails. Mine are notoriously short, but we won’t get into that right now.

Query.

There is both a right and wrong way to go about this.

The RIGHT way:

After a suitable amount of time (usually posted on the submission guidelines of the market) you can politely contact the party in question and ask if they have received your submission yet, just to be sure you didn’t accidentally send your work to Aunt Flo in New Jersey. Alternatively, if you’ve posted your beauty on your blog and received no comments, you can promote the link one more time with a tweet, Facebook post, or link on a relevant site.

The WRONG way:

Email, tweet, or promote your work repeatedly and often, hoping that frequency equates effectiveness, and resulting in your voice becoming the background noise of the publishing world.

Start something new.

It’s the same tired advice writers hear over and over. Just write. Writers write. Get your butt in the chair and your hands on the keyboard.

It may be tired, but it’s true. You can take a break if you want; you might need one. After an exhaustive effort, sometimes the well needs to fill up again before you dip into the ink once more. But after that, if you don’t want to drive yourself crazy, throwing yourself into a new story – be it flash, novella, or a full length novel – keeps you busy and creative and helps you advance in the craft. Practice makes perfect, after all.

Plus, if your fingernails are too short, it’s hard to handle things.

 

*image courtesy of State Library of Queensland, Australia via Flickr. No known copyright restrictions.

 

5 Things to Look for in a Proofreader or Critique Partner

February 7, 2013 in Blog Tour / Blog Hop, Tips and Suggestions by Dana Sitar

Little will be more valuable to your work than having a second set of eyes look over it. No matter how critical your eye, how deep your understanding of language, or how long your writing career is, eventually you lose your ability to see your own errors. That’s why on my Bucket List for 2013 is to find a dedicated writing partner, someone with whom I can swap pieces for critique and proofreading.

I’ve met tons of writers in the past two years of doing this professionally — but is anyone right to be my critique partner? As I begin the search this year, here’s what I’ve determined as the criteria for choosing a critique partner who will help you be the best writer you can be.

1. They should be interested in your genre, but not exactly the same writer as you.

If you write horror, and they never read the genre, their opinion may not be valuable to you. But, if they have exactly the same style, strengths, and weaknesses as you, their eyes won’t likely catch what you miss. A critique partner should be like a brother: someone who can understand you innately and deeply, but who is a distinctly different person from you.

2. They have a similar level of experience to you, but in different areas.

It’s easy in writing and critique groups to wind up with a partner with far less expertise than you, as promising beginners can be lumped in with the less promising. This does you no good, especially if you’re swapping critiques. You’ll have to offer a lot of value and get little in return. Don’t be afraid to be choosy. Screen applicants until you find a good pick. Even though you may not be exchanging money, you should treat this like a business partnership, because that’s how valuable it will be to your writing career.

By finding someone with as much experience and education as you but in different areas, you’ll set up a complementary, balanced partnership.

3. They should support your vision, but not love you so much that they’re afraid to say you’ve failed.

No matter how much writing experience she has, your mother is not a great critique partner, nor is your husband or wife. Their eyes can be valuable for a final sweep of a manuscript, but you shouldn’t lean on their advice alone. Seek someone who has no idea what your life looks like, how you speak day-to-day, and — most importantly — what you’re thinking. People who are close to you are not only too invested in your success to offer a completely objective critique, but they also know you too well to read your work the way a reader will. They might miss a part of your story that will completely confound the reader, because they always understand what  you’re trying to say and don’t want to see where you fall short.

4. They should be professional and good at meeting deadlines — whether you’re on a tight deadline or not.

Professionalism and punctuality are great qualities in any kind of working partner. Even if you’re only writing casually as a hobby, working with someone who can meet deadlines when they exist will help you form the right habits for a possible career in writing. It will also simply help ensure that you are getting feedback when you ask for it, so you’re not held up in your process because they’re not taking it seriously. In addition to their work ethic, look for someone who has similar aspirations for their writing career as yours. If you want to make your career as an author, someone who is writing as a hobby and focusing on other priorities may not be able to help you move in the direction you’re trying to go.

5. They should be someone you can see yourself working with in the future.

Are you working with a critique partner who you feel is just getting you by until you have the time or money to invest in better editing and critiques? Move on from that. Plenty of quality writers will be willing to work with you in exchange for your own quality critique of their work, so find someone who’s good now. Look for someone whose personality is a good match with yours, whose work style fits with yours, and leave yourself open to the possibility of greater work in the future!

Is finding a critique partner on your bucket list for 2013?  Great start!  For more awesome things to do for inspiration, education, and experience this year, check out my new ebook A Writer’s Bucket List.

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